Sorry dude, as much as you'd like to pay a tribute to LP and use this in GD, its copyrighted material, and you won't be allowed to upload this. This song would get removed, or at the very least you won't be scouted because of this upload.
The new melody's good. Mastering wise, this was a little hard to listen to tho. Like dreamless said, you should try to bring out the peak of the kick (the "boom" sound) and less on the tail (the loud bassy sound after the "boom"). Drums were a little too loud in general.
As i said to Corkscrew, i'ts fixed.
I expected a joke song XD
But this is far from a joke. Really creative concept, its based entirely off the old version, keeping all the same synths and rhythms, just changing the chord progressions. And somehow it still works. It has a more mysterious and adventurous feel now, good job.
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